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Death: always a lifetime away by ~losersrule:iconlosersrule:



a single smile;
that's all it takes
to set my blood on fire
to feel it racing
through my veins-
passion thrill desire

a single memory;
retells a past
of joys long since forgotten
while echoes of
the truth remain
of a past that's all but rotten

a single touch;
a hand to hold
embraces full of caring
an eye that twinkles
a grin that shines
friendship forever sharing

a single kiss;
faith warmth acceptance
love and so much more
a mother's hug
a father's smile
a family who adores





a single threat;
that's all it takes
of death in all its glory
to appreciate
and love the world

feel thanks for your life's story
©2007-2009 ~losersrule
:iconlosersrule:

Author's Comments

so this is it ladies and bullwinkles, my final dev.
yet another terrible attempt at something they call poetry in this part of the world. written soon after i was told about the heart condition.
i came upon it today in the back of an old diary.
i hope you get something from it, even if its a mere "thank god shes not submitting anything more..."


just remember: death is always a lifetime away. so live.

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:icongreatgreendragon:
i'll play it for you. :) :lol:

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:icongreatgreendragon:
dont be gone for too long will you.

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i really like the poem. its simple, and it catches the breath in your chest.. and makes you light headed...

.. Oh i dont know.. >.< :lol:

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:iconpsychoviolinist:
i love you..
you and your poetry.
The End

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my violin can kill your viola anyday man!!! STRING WARS!!!! CHARGE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
:iconpsychoviolinist:
PS howd you go in your VCA audition thingy

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my violin can kill your viola anyday man!!! STRING WARS!!!! CHARGE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
:icontodaystomorrow:
i work hard and struggle to create things half as moving as what u write.
smile,
and i hope you come back.

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The more I lose my logic,
The more the lyrics come,
The more mellifluous the language,
The more lilting the lines become.

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